Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts

Trusting the Process

Hey gang! What a wild/fun week I had last week. We went to the Mouse House in Orlando, got up close and personal with Harry Potter, and drank our share of the butterbeer (think sugary cream soda with a SUPER sugary cream topping ... yeah, it's that bad for you, and that awesome).

Enjoying a cold drink in the Hog's Head Tavern- No, that's not butterbeer. ;-)
Anyway, I'm back (physically at least) and ready to make the final push towards the publication of the second Moonsongs book. With a little luck, it'll be out in December. And I'm totally not bragging here, but I'm very excited for people to read it. I think the story is bigger, and in some ways better, than the first. 

Jenny (the mc) is really beginning to stretch her legs as a character. She gets pulled deeper into the supernatural world her tribal ancestors have fought against for so many generations, and learns that not all of the scary things out there want to eat you--some just want you dead. Plus, there are witches, both cool and evil. 

Basically, there's just a lot going on, and I think it'll be a fun ride for folks who enjoy True Blood-esque adventures. I've had a blast crafting it, that's for sure.

TRUSTING THE PROCESS

Photo credit to Lynn Kelley, WANA Commons 
But now it's time for the final polish. That means applying editorial feedback. Some of which is quite straightforward, and pretty painless. Change this word, rearrange that sentence, etc. But some of the changes aren't so easy to execute...

I always try to make sure my stories go into the 'editor' phase as polished as I can make them. That's for two reasons: 1) I don't want to purposefully make my editor take up drinking if they don't already. 2) It translates to less work for me on the other side.

What does sending it in as polished as possible mean for me? Typically 3 drafts pre-beta/critter work overs, and 1 to 2 more post beta/critter. And sometimes, if the beta/critter feedback results in major changes, it might go into another round of beta/critter--and more drafts follow. THEN it goes to the editor. 

Sounds like a lot right? IT IS! But I'm someone who likes to feel confident about something before moving onto the next stage. For me to feel confident in a piece of writing, I need to hear from several different perspectives that I've essentially captured what I set out to do with a particular story. 

These Moonsongs stories are a bit of a different beast, because they're novelettes--which translates to 'longer than a short story, shorter than a novella'. So a big part of my objective is that the plots stay tight, and the pacing zips. I want them to be a movie-like experience. Something you can enjoy in 2-4 hours, and feel that you've been entertained when you finish. 

That's where the editor really pays off. 

Story # 2 has been through multiple critters. While none of them said it was perfect, the feedback was 99% great, and I addressed nearly every quibble the critters had in rewrites prior to sending it off to the editor. 

That's the point where you begin to think--no matter how many times you've been through this process and know better--"I've done it! This is a great story as is." You can't help it. You love your critters. You've read their work, and trust them implicitly. Furthermore, you're really beginning to love the story again. (Trust me, you hate the dang thing at several points during this cycle.) 

Trusting the process is oh so important at this juncture. When those edits come back, and you see the number of things you've missed--or just screwed up--in your 'great story' it feels like starting over in some ways. (But you're totally not!)

You might even be tempted to cross your arms and say, "Bah, readers already like it. Why should I chop out two pages of the opening scene for the sake of pacing?"

The answer is simple: Because you want the story to be everything you dreamt it COULD be. The only chance you have of doing that is making it as tight as possible. That means heeding your editor's advice, listening to your critter complaints, and doing 2 more drafts beyond the last draft you vowed you'd ever do. 

It can be disheartening. It can be fantastic. But it's all part of the process, and that you have to trust.

~EJW~

Edi-t-Phobia

Hey gang! Just got back from a much needed beach vacation. Basically, I have sand in my unmentionables, eyestrain from reading in the sun and frostbite from holding a cold beverage in my hand all week. And it was awesome. Here's proof:


Think I'd like to own one of those houses ...
 It was too windy for her favorite Frisbee so we did the ball instead.


Anyway, I'm rested and eager to jump back into my writing/blogging/tweeting--well, whatever the heck this is. :)


Thanks to the efforts of many of you, the New Adult Lit Chat (our first chat is next Thursday, July 26, 9 PM Eastern!) is getting some fabulous buzz going. You can check out the NALitChat blog HERE for upcoming chat dates, as well as other useful New Adult-y things I'll be posting from time-to-time. If you want to know what it's all about, you can check out my last post HERE.


Sincerely, to all of you who have tweeted, blogged, etc. about it so far: THANK YOU. If I can ever repay you in kind, just ask. Hope to "see" many of you at the chat. It'll be a good time.


Now for some exciting and scary personal writing news: I just got a story back from an "official" editor for the first time! 


I'm very excited about this story. It's a fun little paranormal romp with a Texas twist. (Should I say "twister" to make it more regionally appropriate?) It's a novelette, under 17,000 words and more than 10,000, and the first in a series I've been working diligently on for quite some time. It will be published in the near future, and I'll have much more to say on that in the weeks to come. For now ...


A few of you worked (it is WORK when you read for me, btw) on it as readers over the last couple of months, and your efforts helped whip it into the shape it's in. But, as we all know, our beta, omega, etc. readers can't catch everything. You need the cold, calculating and what I imagine to be lidless lizard-like eyes of a professional editor for the fine tuning. (Kidding. About the cold part at least.)


So the e-mail with her revisions arrived this AM. Super excited to dig in and start making the final changes. Unfortunately, I discovered I have a phobia of opening documents from editors. 


Is it going to overwhelm me? Did I do anything right? Did she re-write the entire thing after the first two pages? 


Don't get me wrong, I've as much confidence in this story as anything I've ever written. I thought it was pretty decent going into the final editing process. But somehow knowing THIS IS IT has me hyperventilating. Scared to death to even start. 


Question for all you old pros out there: Is it going to be this bad every time? Are you on medication? Would you recommend a shot of whiskey or some other adult drink before taking a look? How can I be this excited and this afraid to do something at the same time?


I'm sure at some point this morning I'm going to get started on it. Until then, I'm going to tape my eyes so they'll stop twitching.


~EJW~

Beta Reading = Better Writing

So it ends.  I'm officially calling a halt to my summer blog slowdown.  The heat and drought is making me crazy so I'm mentally ending my summer in an attempt to trick the world into forgetting it's August.  Plus, I kind of miss all of you and your blogs!

I really appreciate those of you who've stuck around during my sporadic and infrequent postings the last couple of months.  Promise you'll see more of me here and on your own blogs in the coming weeks.

Some of the tiny bit of writing work I've gotten done this summer has been in the form of beta reading.  If you're a writer you're probably very familiar with the concept of beta reading.  For the uninitiated, it's basically the process of finding your first (or early) readers for a story.  The idea is to get feedback on the things that work--and the things that don't--and take it all back to the editing room.

It's also a means of creating a sort of 'idea trust' with a group of people who are interested in reading your work critically with the aim of making it the best it can possibly be.  In that way, it really isn't (or shouldn't be in my estimation) strictly an evaluation of the writing quality or mechanics so much as a broad conceptualization of where/what the story is and what the story COULD be.

That isn't to say that writing quality doesn't or shouldn't play a part in the beta process.  Sometimes bad writing gets in the way of a good story, plain and simple.  As a reader if you can't get beyond errors in punctuation, funky sentence structure, etc. you'll likely never stick around long enough to find out if the story actually works.

In the end, it's probably best to think of the beta process as if the story were a newborn foal trying to find its legs.  It can see from the other horses around it what it wants to be, which is a colt or filly running, eating, playing and doing what horses do.  Still, there is a gap between becoming the goal or vision and where the foal currently is (lying in a wet heap in the grass).  It'll need some help to get to that point--probably in the form of an encouraging nuzzle or nudge from momma and the need to stand if it wants to eat.   Just as learning to stand and walk is a fundamental part of a foal growing into a horse, getting feedback from early readers is crucial if you want the words and ideas you've slapped onto the screen to grow into a story.

Fortunately, there are lots of writers out there who've shared that essential little secret to writing success.  In fact, you'll find people asking for and extolling the virtues of beta readers all over the WWW.   What you won't find, however, are tons of people encouraging you to BE a beta reader.  Well, people that aren't looking for beta readers that is.  :-)

There are a few really good reasons why you'll find more people seeking beta readers than offering to be one, and they're things to seriously consider before you jump on board the Reading Railroad's Beta Express.

1) Beta reading is a time commitment--sometimes a big one:  Granted, you're not generally going to be making line edits and going all 8th grade English teacher as a beta reader.  However, you're going to have to read the story start to finish, and most likely twice to do it properly.  I tend to be a slow-ish reader, especially when I'm reading critically, so I usually have to factor that in.

Then there is the matter of actually giving your feedback.  Your style will largely dictate the time investment here.  Some betas write it all up in a big summary e-mail covering major points, and not really going into great detail or specifics.  That takes less time, but might not be the level of feedback desired or needed by the author.  Other betas like to comment on every paragraph and go into considerable detail, going as far as to offer re-writing suggestions and story ideas (me).  That takes much more time but can yield a more profitable experience for all of the parties involved, which I'll talk more about in a moment.

If time is an issue, you can always offer to read a few chapters at a time from a novel.  Most people are willing to take any and all help they can get.

2) Beta reading takes skill: Anyone can read a story and tell you if they like it or not.  It takes a certain level of skill and understanding of the craft to be able to articulate WHY you like it or not, especially in a way that someone else can apply.  Like any skill, it takes practice to become a good beta reader, and it isn't necessarily easy to master.

3) You risk ticking people off: Getting and giving feedback on writing is a delicate business.  Regardless of how well you gird yourself, hearing that your story isn't perfect (or maybe even good *cringe*) stings.  Chances are if you've been asked to be a beta reader you've already formed some kind of relationship with the author, probably a good one, and there is a measure of risk involved if you have to share your honest bad news.  Shoot, the news doesn't have to be THAT bad to ruffle feathers.  This factors into the skill acquisition point in #2, but even if you've mastered the art of the gentle critical analysis, you still might not be asked to help out the next time if your thoughts aren't well received.

4) It's a fine line between under and overqualified: If you beta read enough, no matter your skill as a reader or writer, you'll run into a story so awesome and well-written that you'll instantly feel you can't offer anything of substance to the author other than 'great! great! great!'  We all know that's not what the author wants to hear, because no story is perfect and they wouldn't have come to you just to get fluffy pink feedback--otherwise they'd have just had their moms read it.  Similarly, you'll read stories you'll barely be able to make it through.  The author didn't come to you be told to give up on writing, they came to you for help and growth.  Navigating the different levels of the various authors is tricky and never gets easier.

SO WHY BETA READ WHEN IT SOUNDS LIKE SO MUCH WORK AND HASSLE?

Beta reading is unquestionably demanding, but there are some big time reasons why you (the writer) should be lining up to do it outside of simply helping out a friend or cohort in need.

1) Developing a critical and understanding eye: I believe you learn how to write by reading.  Technically, every book you read for fun is going to help you become a better writer.  Even still, beta reading will allow to go to new levels of understanding.  As a beta, you try to catch all of the good and the bad.  You break a story apart instead of devouring it.  Kind of like taking a watch apart, once you see all of the pieces spread out before you you'll have a much better idea of why it works or why it doesn't.  It's a forest for the trees thing, and nothing is better at helping you develop an eye for it than being a beta.

2) Learn new tricks:  There are a lot of doggone good writers out there, and you can steal learn from every single one of them.  Some of the biggest leaps I've made in my own writing have come via critiquing others and seeing how they approach things in different ways.  From plot to characterization, I add something new to my toolbox almost every time I beta read.

3) By learning to give feedback, you also learn how apply it:  Nothing prepares you for the beta process as an author like participating as a reader.  I mentioned above that feedback stings.  As you work as a beta reader you learn to consider how feedback will be taken, and in turn how it might be applied.  At some point in the writing process you have to get feedback.  I'd suggest learning how to give it first, and THEN learning how to take it.

So what are you waiting for?  Offer to beta read for someone, and I promise you'll see positive results in your own writing.  Plus you'll get some seriously good writing karma when it comes time for you to fish for your own betas.

~EJW~
            

    

A-Z Writer's Toolbox: Yoga & Zen

GOING ON BLOGCATION:

A-Z is finished!  Thank you all so much for sticking with me this month (and thanks to all of the new followers as well)!  This was truly a challenge, and I really feel a sense of accomplishment having pulled it off.  I'll confess that when I started I never thought I would be able to keep up with posting daily for an entire month.  I guess you never know what you can do until you try?  I hope I've provided you with at least a few helpful bits of information, inspiration or entertainment in the process.

Taking part in the challenge has put me way behind in keeping up with all of the wonderful blogs I follow (you all), responding to all of the people who've taken the time to follow and comment on my A-Z posts, and various other blog community tasks.  I greatly apologize for that.  Consequently, I'm going to be taking a blog vacation for the next few weeks in an attempt to read all of the great stuff I've undoubtedly missed.  I'm also going to work on finishing a couple of writing projects that have taken a backseat.  I'll apologize in advance for the silence, but I hope to come back energized with loads of great stuff to talk about.  Until then, take care and keep writing.

~EJW~

Y and Z are for yoga and zen



Let me put this out there right from the start: I'm not suggesting writers need to take up yoga.  Undoubtedly, we'd all be a little more healthy for it, but I'm not sure it's in the cards for everyone.  Personally, I'm about as flexible as petrified tree dowsed in cement, and spandex and I have never been the best of friends.  I digress ...

As a discipline there is a ton that writers can learn from yoga.  There's a saying that yoga is 99% practice and 1% theory, and I think that applies to writing as well.  Although some may have a natural ability, most of the folks who truly excel at writing had to learn how.  They learned how through repetition.

In yoga, concentration is king.  To hold an excruciating pose you must block out your discomfort, you must block out distractions, and you must above all focus on the act itself.

Writing is no different.  It's often intensely uncomfortable and infinitely difficult to sustain.  Much like yoga, writing takes an incredible amount of discipline and patience.  Very little in writing can be learned quickly, and mastery can take a lifetime--if it comes at all.  It is a daily grind that requires strength and endurance.

Like yoga, progress in writing is often hard to measure, and almost solely gauged on an individual basis.  Forget comparing yourself to others in yoga, it's an internal and subjective act.  You're only going to best yourself.  I think the same SHOULD apply to writing.  Forget comparisons, just try to be better than you were the day before.

Yoga and the Zen philosophy go hand in hand, as do writing and Zen.  Zen is all about attaining wisdom and enlightenment through study and self-reflection.  Yoga teaches Zen by forcing you to explore your limits (both physical and mental).  If you attempt to write your flaws and limits will flash like a neon sign from day one.  Zen emphasizes slowing down mentally, as does yoga.  Writing a novel forces you to slow down and examine the parts of a whole.

There are so many other commonalities we could discuss, but I think I'll leave you with a few Zen quotes and sayings to let you ponder how it might apply to your writing life.

Lao Tzu ~
"The journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step."


Do not speak - unless it improves on silence.

The path of the enlightened one leaves no track- it is like the path of birds in the sky.

All that we are is the result of what we have thought. The mind is everything. What we think we become.

We cannot see our reflection in running water. It is only in still water that we can see.
Student says " I am very discouraged. What should I do?" Master says, "encourage others."

To know the road ahead, ask those coming back.

A jug fills drop by drop.

A-Z Writer's Toolbox: X-Ray Vision



A to Z Disclaimer:
Like all craftspeople, writers need to keep a bag of tricks handy. A set of tools for the job (writing), if you will. Some of these traits or tools are obvious--like the need to have a hide as thick as a brick, for instance. Some are not. This month, I've been challenged to do a post every day of the week (excluding Sunday) that begins with a letter of the alphabet. I'm going to use this challenge to examine some of those necessary writing tools, both conventional and not. Hold on to your #2 pencil, here we go!

NOTE: I've added a page dedicated to my A to Z Writer's Toolbox posts. I figured I'd soon have a bunch of these things and it'll make it easier for you to browse any of the letters you might have missed. You can find a link to the page under the, "MORE STUFF" heading at the top of the right-hand column of this page.


X is for x-ray vision

Creative writing isn't about re-telling life as it happens on the surface.  That's the stuff that anyone can see.  Creative writing is about digging deeper, and examining the internal conflicts and circumstances that truly define humanity.

We don't tell the reader 'this is the bad guy', but rather show them why that's the bad guy.  We let their intent speak through their actions.  To do that we have to understand what is going on beneath the surface.  What life circumstances drove the person to the brink of destroying the world?  What's his biggest fear?  His grandest hope?  We have to know all of those things in order to write convincing and compelling stories, and we have to know them for every character.

The best way to learn to convey those layers of complexity in writing is to learn to see them in the everyday life around you.  We need to develop an acute form of x-ray vision that allows us to see the story within a story, so to speak.

For example: You overhear a couple arguing at the store.  From their words, it appears to be a simple argument over the husband picking out the wrong kind of cheese.  Now put on your writerly x-ray glasses.  Maybe the wife views this as yet another sign of the husband's disinterest in the day-to-day life of the family, or perhaps the husband purposefully defied her because he found out she has been cheating and doesn't have the courage to confront her with words yet.  Either way, there's clearly much more going on than a debate over cheese.

That's the kind of examination we need to use in our writing.  The ability to see beyond the surface will take an ordinary story and change it into something compelling.

~EJW~


A-Z Writer's Toolbox: Verve & Wile


A to Z Disclaimer:

Like all craftspeople, writers need to keep a bag of tricks handy. A set of tools for the job (writing), if you will. Some of these traits or tools are obvious--like the need to have a hide as thick as a brick, for instance. Some are not. This month, I've been challenged to do a post every day of the week (excluding Sunday) that begins with a letter of the alphabet. I'm going to use this challenge to examine some of those necessary writing tools, both conventional and not. Hold on to your #2 pencil, here we go!

NOTE: I've added a page dedicated to my A to Z Writer's Toolbox posts. I figured I'd soon have a bunch of these things and it'll make it easier for you to browse any of the letters you might have missed. You can find a link to the page under the, "MORE STUFF" heading at the top of the right-hand column of this page.





V is for verve






Do your characters share the very air you breathe?  When they whisper, does it tickle your ear?  Are readers thrust into the air with every upswing in your story, or crushed beneath the weight of the mighty circumstances you've set forth?

What I'm really asking is does your writing have verve--a life or spirit that makes it more than words on paper or screen?

We've all read a story that so completely comes alive in our minds that we can scarcely distinguish between reality and fiction when we are trapped inside its pages.  In our minds the hero becomes our friend, the villain our worst enemy and the quest our own soul-churning journey.  We cry with the losses and cheer the victories as if we were watching it all unfold live in some gigantic sports arena.

Anyone who has ever attempted to write a fictitious paragraph, much less a novel, can tell you that the 'verve factor' is nothing short of magic.  Some writers seem to be born with the ability to infuse their prose with a sort of crackling energy that leaps from the pages and grabs hold of anyone who strays to close.  Their words are like the literary equivalent of potato chips or chocolate; you'll devour them even when you're too full to sensibly want more.  It seems the rest of us can only marvel at the show and hope that some of the magic rubs off on our own writing.

However, after considering some of my favorite crack reads (the ones I can't give up or put down), I think that maybe we can (to an extent) manufacture verve.  I believe that there are some common traits shared among the most lively story tellers that we can put in our toolboxes.  Here are four ways to bring spirit to your story:

1) Real Characters: Great characters suck me into a story quicker than anything, but it isn't the "greatness" of a character that really makes the story come alive.  More often than not it's the normal aspects of a character, or the parts I can directly identify with, that keep me turning the pages.  Moreover, it's when those characters act in ways that I could see myself acting that things really get interesting.  Whether it's a hero who gets frustrated with his best friend and says something awful, or a villain who loves his mother yet plans to destroy the world with a zombie virus--keep it real.  (Not that I plan on destroying the world with a zombie virus, but I do love my mom!)

2) A+ Dialogue: Nothing puts my mind into a scene like a great conversation between characters.  Humans are highly social creatures, and unique for our ability to communicate with words.  Lively stories have vivacious characters, and those characters have meaningful and engaging conversations.

3) Exceptional Settings:  We're all familiar with the concept of making a setting so detailed and full of life that it becomes a character in our stories.  While I'm not certain that the setting needs to be a star, I've found that the most gripping stories have fantastic settings and description.  For a story to truly come to life, the setting needs to have an impact on the characters and the reader.  If the damp night air of an enchanted forest sends a shiver down the spine of our hero, it'll most likely do the same to our readers.

4) Conflict: When things get messy our minds tend to shift into overdrive.  If there's a problem, we immediately jump to possible solutions.  It's human nature, and it's something we can use in our writing.  Every scene should have a conflict.  Every. Scene.  That doesn't mean we have to have a gun fight on every page, but it does mean we should be actively engaging our readers by having our characters face frequent mental and/or physical obstacles.

W is for wile



Are you a trickster in your writing?  Like the Coyote in the cartoon above, do you set traps for the reader, hoping that this is the time you snare them?  Here's why you should ...

I read for the unexpected, not the expected.  I WANT to be baited and switched.  In fact, I get a little upset when an author gets predictable.  How entertaining would it be if your friend told you a story about their trip to the grocery store and all that happened was a trip to the grocery store?  Not very.  Throw in a purse snatching and a car chase, however, and now you've got a story!

My point is that readers are smart, and they're always on to our schemes.  We have to be tireless in our efforts to pull the rug out from under them.  To do that we have to utilize all of our wile and wit.  Every character should have layers of complexity, and every plot a potential twist.

~EJW~

A-Z Writer's Toolbox: Hacksaw


A to Z Disclaimer:

Like all craftspeople, writers need to keep a bag of tricks handy. A set of tools for the job (writing), if you will. Some of these traits or tools are obvious--like the need to have a hide as thick as a brick, for instance. Some are not. This month, I've been challenged to do a post every day of the week (excluding Sunday) that begins with a letter of the alphabet. I'm going to use this challenge to examine some of those necessary writing tools, both conventional and not. Hold on to your #2 pencil, here we go!

NOTE: I've added a page dedicated to my A to Z Writer's Toolbox posts. I figured I'd soon have a bunch of these things and it'll make it easier for you to browse any of the letters you might have missed. You can find a link to the page under the, "MORE STUFF" heading at the top of the right-hand column of this page.

H is for hacksaw


I'm convinced that every writer who has ever attempted a novel has experienced some version of the following:

The first draft is finished! Victory horns sound in the distance, confetti falls and unicorns do a merry prance about your living room. Then you re-read it cover-to-cover for the first time and realize all you've really accomplished is that you've somehow compiled every writing mistake possible into a 350 page magnum opus of disjointed plots and bland characters. Plus, you've got a splitting headache (did they have to blow those damned horns so loudly?), confetti sticking to you in unmentionable places and unicorn poo on the good rug. Great ...

Thankfully, those drafts are usually never as bad as they seem. (Sadly, neither are they as good as they felt during the writing.) We're left with something that, if it were a house, would be considered a fixer-upper. It has good bones, and a nice floor-plan. However, if we're going to make it livable it's going to need some creativity and truckloads of polish. Heck, we may even need to take down a wall or three or add an addition.

That's why the hacksaw is such an important tool for writers. When it comes to editing and rewrites, we often need to dissect the novel piece by piece and place it under a microscope for critical examination. If something doesn't work, we cut it out. We might need to do some rearranging; after all, chapter 1 sometimes makes a better chapter 4, or maybe no chapter at all. You wouldn't try to fix a rundown home all at once. You'd take it room-by-room or project-by-project. Nor should you try to tackle a novel as whole.

It's going to take some elbow grease and you're going to get dirty, but when it comes to editing, the ability to hack your work into more manageable pieces is vital. 

So the next time you're staring down a completed, if slightly shabby, manuscript reach for your trusty saw. It'll make editing easier, and we all know how much fun playing with tools can be!

~EJW~

BEWARE THE MANUSCRIPT BEAST!


My opponent never tires … never gives up. I’ve spent the last several weeks hacking at his very soul, using weapons that should have reduced him to nothing more than a few well ordered pages. Yet still he remains, fat and bloated on the excess imagination he’s devoured.


He’s fearsome to behold. His stare is the stare of 10,000 coffee saturated hours. His breath has the disgusting reek of superfluous conjugation. Adverbs slip from his every pore like maggots. They seek out new works to infest, and for every one I cut down, six more take their place! Hardened layers of exposition take the shape of cruel horns. They jute out at every angle, and I fear they are too numerous to file down. Bad dialogue has grouped to form rows of razor sharp teeth that tear at my fingers and rip away the flesh of my resolve. I’ve come to fear the sight of my opponent as one fears the shadow of his own death.

Our arena is a temple of unfulfilled dreams, half-drank glasses of wine, and dying promises. Signs of our epic struggle surround me; severed pages, dead plots, useless character sketches, and disemboweled how-to-books litter every surface. Yellow sticky notes are splashed on the walls like the blood of order-craving insects that’ve gotten squashed beneath my foe’s heavy boot. A once hardy chair now crumbles under the perpetual weight of a cruel master; the once glimmering desk is only a scuffed prop in an out of control war. How a creative heart could survive in such a despairing place is beyond reckoning.

Yet survive I must. Too many good people have succumbed to the Manuscript Beast. Some have given him their lives, a lucky few have only lost years. His reign must end! I see now that to best him I will need an arsenal of exceptional tools:

I will need The Sword of COURAGE to fight the doubts of those who say I cannot win.

I will need The Shield of STRENGTH to endure the hours, days, and weeks of battle that still lay ahead.

I will need The Spear of WISDOM to attack my opponent’s weaknesses.

Lastly, I will need The Armor of HEART to sustain me when my rational mind is turned to poison by the Beast’s relentless assault.


*** Note from the author ***
This post is dedicated (in fun) to all of you who have been fighting through edits. It sucks, but I’m convinced that we can (and will) win. Happy writing this week, and go give the Beast some hell for me!